tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4058257051535761456.post8705471702690390571..comments2023-05-03T21:11:15.051+12:00Comments on Aye's Blog : Published productAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04959567575882406373noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4058257051535761456.post-50986620752110319442014-04-12T09:03:01.013+12:002014-04-12T09:03:01.013+12:00I agree with James Aye. I love your use of words. ...I agree with James Aye. I love your use of words. I especially like how you used short sentences to add emphasis and suspense like this 'Then I heard we had to crawl under. We had to crawl quite low. As low as you can crawl!'. Great job!Ebony Maakahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04278822081519785920noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4058257051535761456.post-2102857555828136272014-03-29T12:34:02.029+13:002014-03-29T12:34:02.029+13:00I love your text selection Aye. Cleched, Invaded, ...I love your text selection Aye. Cleched, Invaded, tiptoed all add to clarity and detail I get when I read your story. Your use of similes and metaphors also add to the interest as I read about your experiences. Well done on a superb piece of writing.<br /><br />J Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4058257051535761456.post-57122841600841229922014-03-25T14:17:55.591+13:002014-03-25T14:17:55.591+13:00This is a polished one. Keep on writing Aye, it is...This is a polished one. Keep on writing Aye, it is fantastic.momnoreply@blogger.com