The poem I wrote about was about seeing the Disneyland Fireworks. Here it is:
Bang! Bang! Bang!
The celebration has begun
Pow! Pow! Pow!
The colors explode to life
Lying in the grass,
Staring at the blanket of stars
Dreaming with my cousin
Music gets louder
Disney idols appear
The heart of Animation,
In one big splat of colors
A canvas of dreams appear
For being like no other.
1) Reflect on the links to senses you used:
I think have used most of the five senses except for smell because I didn't know how to include this in my poem.
2) Reflect on the language features you used:
I think I have used repetition and short sentences. I found short sentences easy for including in my poem because one word can make a poem more powerful.
3) Reflect on what you could improve on next time:
Next time I would like to include ALL of the senses (see, hear, feel, taste and smell) and also try to use a variety of language features.