In class we have been writing a poem from our childhood. Here is mine....
Remember when making my parents concerned that I couldn't talk till I was 3? Then I finally to started to speak only a little.
Remember walking to class and out of no where a boy ran over me? My mum was worried sick!
Remember when I took a bite of a kiwi fruit for the first time in Pre School and ended up in the hospital? That was really unexpected.
Remember grasping my breath from an asthma attack in Yr 2?
Remember listening to a boring piano song which was like 10 pages long.
That was me growing up!
My first draft:
Remember walking to class and out of no where a boy ran over me? My mum was worried sick!
Remember when I took a bite of a kiwi fruit for the first time in Pre School and ended up in the hospital? That was really unexpected.
Remember grasping my breath from an asthma attack in Yr 2?
Remember listening to a boring piano song which was like 10 pages long.
That was me growing up!
My first draft:
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