Feedback: I like how you have lots of detail.
Feedforward:I think you can work on alliteration.
From Aalaa
Feedback:the story has heaps of describing words.
Feedforward:you could add smilies
From Ella
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Learning partners comments:
Feedback: I like how you have lots of detail.
Feedforward:I think you can work on alliteration.
From Aalaa
Feedback:the story has heaps of describing words.
Feedforward:you could add smilies
From Ella
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