Tuesday 24 March 2015

Why Apples Are Red

Purpose: create a story to share orally
Description: Oral storytelling is a Maori tradition. We have been planning our own story to tell on the Marae in Week 7.



My Story planning:


My setting:



My Story board:




My final storytelling:





Feedback/Feedforward
I liked your face exprashons it actually made it make more sense for me, I noticed that you used most of that time making a big croud you might have to next time talk a bit slower because I couldn't really understand you. Gaby :P

Evaulation:
I think I have really done well in my storytelling. I have tried to add more humour and crowd participation at my performance at the marae. I do think I could make improvements though. What I think I should work on is to drag the audience in a bit more.

2 comments:

  1. Hey aye devin here please work on your humor its a bit low
    and your story was meaningful so i got your message clearly well done

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  2. Thank you for your honest evaluation Aye. What would you do to 'drag the audience' in more?

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